有关教育发展的议论文(关于教育发展的议论文)

Teaching and Learning

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Teaching and Learning. You should write on less than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1．教与学是教育的同一个过程；

2．但是，教与学有时被分离；

3．我们不能单纯依靠老师。

【范文】

Teaching and Learning

Teaching and Learning are parts of the same educational experience. While passing knowledge to① the students, a teacher is also learning. He learns from② his teaching materials and his students’ questions, and above all③, he gains experience from④ his own teaching. On the part of⑤ the students, they learn from the teacher, from the books and also from their peers. Therefore, teaching and learning are of one unity, supportive of each other⑥.

Unfortunately, teaching and learning are sometimes treated as⑦ two separate things. In such a situation, the teacher is only regarded as⑧ the one who gives whereas the students consider themselves solely as passive receivers⑨ and thus do not try to make an active use of⑩ his brains. As a result11, both the teacher and students fail to12 cooperate satisfactorily with each other and work efficiently.

As a student, I think we shouldn’t always count on13 teachers. Listening to teachers in classroom is only part of the learning, the greater part of which exists outside the class. To be good students in the real sense14, we should try to develop our ability to work independently, share what we are strong in15 with each other and learn to put what we have learned into practice16.

【注释】

①pass knowledge to：把知识传授给…

②learn from：从…中学习（知识）

③above all：首先，首要的是

④gain experience from：以…中获得经验

⑤on the part of：对…来说

⑥supportive of each other：互相支持

⑦be sometimes treated as：有时被当作…

⑧be only regarded as：只被当作…

⑨consider themselves solely as passive receivers：只把他们自己当成被动的接受者

⑩make an active use of：积极利用…

11as a result：结果是

12fail to：做…失败

13count on：依靠；依赖

14in the real sense：真正意义上的

15what we are strong in：我们很强的方面，我们的强项

16put what we have learned into practice：实践我们的知识

【点评】

这是一篇根据汉语提纲所写的三段式议论文。这种题型的作文在大学英语四级考试中经常出现。

全文三个自然段分别紧扣三点提纲，逐步展开。而且这三个自然段的开始句均为各段的主题句。第一段首先说：Teaching and learning are parts of the same educational experience。接着谈到了老师和学生双方均可从教学过程中学到知识，增长智慧，双方互相支持。第二段以Unfortunately开头，暗示了本段将谈论与前面所述相反的内容，接着写出了本段的主题句teaching and learning are sometimes treated as two separate things。下文就谈到了人们所持的另一中观点：老师是知识的传授者，学生只是知识接受者，并指明了这样带来的不良结果：双方不能有效地合作。第三段谈论了作者本人作为一名学生所应持的态度和观点，并向广大读指明了怎样才能成为一个真正的学生。

参考文献：英语作文高分必背丛书：大学英语四级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005