last week 情感教育(last weekend情感目标)
“Hello, Belle! I’m Amy, Linda's daughter”.
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参考答案：
1．Dear Kevin,
Learning that you are an enthusiastic fan of Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair to be held at the Art Center in our school on February 1, 2022.
To help students learn about the traditional Chinese culture, a wide selection of books, pictures, and handicrafts will be exhibited, varying from art, culture to history. The guide will interpret each piece in detail, from which you can benefit a lot. Additionally, some extraordinary paper-cutting and calligraphy works from students in our school will be on display. It is a good chance for you to gain a deeper insight into China.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Kevin写封邮件，邀请他参加你校将举办的中国传统文化展。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth.
此外：additionally→in addition
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To help students learn about the traditional Chinese culture, a wide selection of books, pictures, and handicrafts will be exhibited, varying from art, culture to history.
拓展句：To help students learn about the traditional Chinese culture, a wide selection of books, pictures, and handicrafts will be exhibited, which vary from art, culture to history.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that you are an enthusiastic fan of Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair to be held at the Art Center in our school on February 1, 2022. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The guide will interpret each piece in detail, from which you can benefit a lot. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．Paragraph 1:
I opened the door and found “ Linda ” standing there. The girl was with the same black wavy hair, the same big naughty eyes，and the same smile, and she held two brochures in her arms. She was about the same age when I had met Linda the first time. She couldn't be Linda! I remembered that I had learned from my neighbor that Linda had a daughter who looked so much like her. I was sure the girl was her daughter.
Paragraph 2:
" Hello, Belle! I 'm Amy, Linda 's daughter ". What a wonderful surprise! Then Amy called out to someone hiding behind a tree, "Come out now. We have succeeded in surprising her"! Here came Linda. You cannot imagine the excitement we felt when we saw each other after so many years. That afternoon, the three of us went for a walk in the forest, collecting different leaves and enjoying the pleasure of friendship and companionship.
【解析】
本文以人物线索展开，讲述了作者在搬新家后遇到的第一个人是Linda, 她有着黑色的卷发，调皮的大眼睛，脸上一直带着微笑。她把所有的业余时间都用来收集树叶并把它们贴在小册子上。作者和她成了很好的姐妹，一起在森林中度过了很多难忘的时光。后来多年未见Linda, 上周得到消息，Linda在法国定居了，并且有了一个女儿。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我打开门，看到“Linda”站在那儿。” 可知，第一段可描写作者仔细打量面前这个姑娘，虽然和记忆中的Linda很像，但年龄对不上。
②由第二段首句内容“你好， Belle! 我是 Amy, Linda的女儿。”可知，第二段可描写作者与Linda重聚，并一起去森林里拾落叶，重温友谊。
2.续写线索：打量——惊喜——重聚——捡落叶———感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类：
① 抱着： held sth in one’s arms / take sth in one’s hands
② 大声喊道： call out/shout/exclaim/yell
③ 捡落叶： pick up/ collect/ gather
情绪类:
① 惊喜 surprise /amazement
② 兴奋、激动 excitement / thrill
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I remembered that I had learned from my neighbor that Linda had a daughter who looked so much like her. （宾语从句，定语从句）
[高分句型2] Here came Linda. （完全倒装）
[高分句型3] That afternoon, the three of us went for a walk in the forest, collecting different leaves and enjoying the pleasure of friendship and companionship.（现在分词作伴随状语）
